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"do you believe in love at first sight?"

"do you, doll?"

"i'm not sure. does a tree struck by lightning have a scar?"

"yes. same as a person.  can you clap one handed?"

-slap- "answer the first question."

"its possible. nice come back. "

"do you pick up abe when hes face down?"

"no. do you put him face up?"

"yes. do you believe in ghosts?"

"no, people die, they go to heaven or hell depending on circumstance...."

"wrong, souls are energy, energy cannot be created or destroyed, heaven could
exist, but it'd be offly crowded, pick another answer, where does it go if it doesn't
get reused? they can't be waste."

"you're an odd one dollface, i suppose they stay, things have moved without me
touching them before, right  before my eyes."

"stars, i think they may light stars.  what are you looking for?"

"love at first sight dollface, i bought you a drink, and you haven't taken a single
sip, that's just bad manners."

"define love."

"a good time, kissing... you know, all that jazz."

"you've got a nice buzz hmmm?"

"mmmmmmmm. i do doll face, that i do."

"you're a waste... doll face."
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i don't know, it started out pretty, a nice conversation and warped into one at a bar with a drunk and philosophies i'm not too sure of.

tell me if you find anything good about it, i can't.

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*Flash-Fic-Month day 13

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all drunk men and women are philosophers ! never forget that :lol:

"yes. same as a person. can you clap one handed?"

-slap- "answer the first question." -brilliant :)

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I really like it. I love how it starts so innocent and ends so twisted...because I don't even know...I guess maybe because I know how situations never end the way we think they will...because our expectations are so limited on what we wish that we had and what we think we need that we look for that in even the most random stranger at a bar...it's like...they always say that you should always treat everyone like they could be the one for you...but you're SUPPOSED to know instantaneously who that "one" person is supposed to be. I dunno...I guess we all just wanna be dreamers now and then...We're all looking for the ultimate high....the ultimate escape and when we think we have it we don't want it...or we get so scared of it that we shove it away....And...then we start thinking that that person wasn't who we thought they were...and realize they weren't at all who we wanted them to be...and then we move on...to the next stranger...searching for love at first sight...something that so many people say they don't even believe in...but must...because everybody is secretly looking for it....I dunno...

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awfully- not offly

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happened to you too many times hmm? :hug:
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What the hell were you reading? :confused:

Haha. This was a great comment to read for the day. For some reason, I just enjoyed reading this random post of wandering thoughts.

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I found the whole thing worthwhile. :)

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:] thank you, i still think its pretty bad

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