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Promises broken
Memories dulled
Thoughts plucked away
Imagination folds
Ending the game
The gears no longer turn
The mind's slammed shut
It has nothing left to learn  
©2007-2009 *betweenthepages
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got dragged into poetry by people I'm watching.

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:iconlogansole14:
=O

This.

Is.

Very.

Good.

I like how you used the words --Thoughts plucked away-- Very cool, very well written.

:heart:

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~Loge:ahoy:
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'I feel so violated... do it again!'
:iconheroicseniorofficer:
Me.

hehehe.

and LoganSole14.

I think.

like your other poem.

Good.

Nice.

Brief.

To the point.

Concise.

Unlike.

This Message.

Yay.

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How Many Inquisitor's Does it Take to Screw in a lightbulb?
Three!
One to call it heretical!
One to deny its existence!
One to screw it in!
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Here's to us shmoes working for the man, albeit a beautiful, sexy, female man.
:iconwolfrose:
I'd expand it. It seems like it's missing alot.

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the next person who says "Twilight" is at all literary in my vicinity is getting their spleen ripped out and handed to them.

R.I.P. Syd Barrett and Richard Wright
:iconbetweenthepages:
thanks for the fav! nother :glomp: of doom!
:iconlogansole14:
:D no problem!

w00t! :hug:

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~Loge:ahoy:
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'I feel so violated... do it again!'
:iconlockedinsidemyhead00:
very nice, straight to the point, short and sweet, i like it

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Purple brusies, Black hearts, This is what, You 'love' can start
:iconbetweenthepages:
blah, this was for art, text was used as the backround, im glad no one at school was paying attention or Id be with a theripest right now XD
:iconlockedinsidemyhead00:
lol, thats great

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Purple brusies, Black hearts, This is what, You 'love' can start

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